SIGH
So I took critiques and suggestions into consideration, like I said I would, aaand have made this page more traditional than the few before it, as well as have taken the camera focus out from the faces for the second last panel, and have added a couple of different perspectives, despite having never drawn them before. @_@;
Anywho. Yes. :D I think the rest of the pages will look like this, with that traditional, fuller look. Not all digitally toned, cause I suck at that and it doesn't suit my style.
Sorry for the pages not looking consistent to each other. >< It won't happen anymore, unless I get better of course. =3
Hey there you are...
Great work with that perspective shot, nice little challenge I'm sure it was. I am enjoying the flow of the story so far, had a little cliff hanger experience before I realized you posted the next page on another website. All I can say is to just keep at it. Good work.
Wow, this comic is awesome! I like the coloured eyes idea - besides just being really cool, it helps me identify characters better.
Bah, inconsistency. In the first stages of comicking things are bound to change as you find better ways. I say if it changes for the better, it can only be a good thing. :)
Keep up the awesomeness.
SIGH
So I took critiques and suggestions into consideration, like I said I would, aaand have made this page more traditional than the few before it, as well as have taken the camera focus out from the faces for the second last panel, and have added a couple of different perspectives, despite having never drawn them before. @_@;
There's nothing wrong with the pages not being consistent. If it's all for the sake of progress, that's the most important thing!
Like It
I like the manga style^^
*leans into computer* O_O mhhhh...
