Commentary:

Kaiverta, 29 Sep 2007 03:24 pm

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WAAAAAAAAA~~

I gotta get a grip! I'm so sorry I keep updating late. I donno what's wrong with m'brain! >.<;


Thanks again to everyone who's still following! ;~; I appreciate it SO much!


If you don't understand what's going on in this page, then BAH to me. I'll edit this description later, depending on how many people leave comments with questions, and I'll update with the answers to those questions so make sure to check back if you ask one!

P.S: Yes. ^-^; The circular bubbles are thought bubbles. The square bubbles are speech bubbles with little triangular thingies that point to the person who is speaking.

Discussion:

Nite Lewis, 29 Sep 2007 04:07 pm

It looks very interesting :D

MyriamD, 29 Sep 2007 04:11 pm

Interesting... Hmm, I'm just betting this "brother" had leeeaaann written because he fell forward himself rather than got poisoned/tranquilized. Poor Azriel, though. Very interesting comic!

Kaiarynn, 29 Sep 2007 04:20 pm

Yes... this is very interesting. I like it. And your artwork is AWESOME!!! Please continue. :D
THANX

wax911, 29 Sep 2007 10:34 pm

dun dun dun

winzrella, 01 Oct 2007 06:47 am

I believe most of the text is his thoughts, aren't they? However it took me a moment to realize it with this and the previous page.
Maybe it's just that usually the speech pubbles for thoughts are done differently...
Well, good work anyway! And I just thought I would point my thoughts out, but it's alright like this as well.
Or was he actually speaking outloud?

Edit: forgot to point out that I really like the first panel :)

Danuh, 18 Sep 2008 01:55 pm

nice comic so far :>
Mmmm the military-esque aspects are certainly delicious and make for an interesting story, i think.

Please continue~

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