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Commentary:

Kaiverta, 18 Oct 2007 07:12 am

For future reference, the speech bubbles that don't have quotation marks around the words (I.E. The last speech bubble "What're you talking about?" ) indicate someone talking off 'camera'. And thanks to a reader's suggestion, I've decided NOT to have an arrow pointing to where the person speaking is. Instead, he's just off-camera, behind Tactic as you can tell in panel ONE. :D

Anyway, urrrrh. I hope you all enjoy this page. It was very experimental for me. @_@ Also, if this is your first time reading through all of the pages, please leave a smiley face to let me know who you are so I can thank you. ^^; (assuming my PM system will let me message you guys, that is @_@ )

Kaiverta, 18 Oct 2007 09:47 pm

Yay! Thanks so much to the new fans. ;~; I hope you guys check back soon to get this message. I can't PM any of you for some reason. Very frustrating. @_@;

But yep. THANKS AGAIN, WEEEEEEEEEE x3;;

EDIT!!!!!: Hey guys. Don't forget to read my news posts, as I often ask of you questions. :D Thankya.

Discussion:

64Cheese, 18 Oct 2007 10:11 am

I'm not sure if I've left a comment on your comic before, but I've been reading it for a little while. You've got great talent!

RileyMisaku, 18 Oct 2007 12:15 pm

I think I left a comment at least once?
Grah, I never thank the person who makes the comic that often.
So thanks to making a really great comic!
I really like that angle in panel two.

Jess, 18 Oct 2007 03:39 pm

I'm not sure if I've ever left a comment or not but I know I've PMed you before.
I love how everything's black and white except for the eyes. I also like how you draw with such detail. The different hairstyles are cool too ^_^

Mormoset, 18 Oct 2007 03:48 pm

hey and i love your art work
might do some fan fictions so i can get semi as good guy bodies as you do
*steals solitery and huggles him* your so deadly its adorable <3

FatHobbit, 18 Oct 2007 09:39 pm

OMFG I LOVE HOW YOU DRAW HAIR.

Just read through the archives, can't wait for more! : D

Zira27, 21 Oct 2007 08:08 am

nice job awesome comic! :D more please. I love your drawing style. yay pencil! ^^

MyriamD, 21 Oct 2007 05:45 pm

I just realized... I agree with the hair comment. Plus, I never thanked you. MERCI BEAUCOUP!

yakuria, 22 Oct 2007 04:23 pm

See look a long indepth comment!! ^___^

(I left a smiley lol)

hmmm I wonder if the person off camera is solitary....no, that would be way to casual.... this is starting to make me think.....WHO IS OFF CAMERA!!!! Anyway good storyline so far. I love the whole concept. The all male cast is cool to but....will there be any females in this story? It's cool if there isn't but just curious. I really like the look of your artwork. You do hair very nicely and it is always has movement and doesn't look stiff, like mine do. *sigh* So, how long have you been drawing? I have been drawing for three/four years although my progress doesn't seem that way. It almost seems like I am going backwards. Although now I am really trying hard to get better at draw comics so I can start one of my own. (You inspired me ^__^) So I have been practicing my but off on backgrounds, different angles, emotions, etc. (Also you backgrounds are quite snazzy) So um, keep up the good work and I will add another lengthy comment next page!

Kaiverta, 23 Oct 2007 11:31 pm

For everyone, yes there will be female characters in the story. It makes the dynamic between the boys more interesting. MWAHAHA.

For MyriamD: Why are you thanking me? ^^;