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Commentary:

Kaiverta, 14 Jan 2008 10:33 pm

You know, every time I finish a page a few days early, I always want to upload it before Thursday. xD; But NO! I must have self-control, and I do.
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EDIT: That aside, I've decided that there are a lot of users on during the 3pm hour on Wednesdays, so here's the page, a day early. I think I'll upload on Wednesdays now. :D

Page 24. It was really fun to draw, and as you can see, also experimental. I'm still trying to find an actual style that showcases my own style but fits into the category of 'manga' as well, but hopefully you, The Warehouse readers, don't mind the change in design and detail and toning. =3 Just be patient. >>

ALSO, please try to leave a comment if you fav. >>;

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EDIT: I changed the chapter cover. ^^ Go look if you'd like, and let me know what you think.

Discussion:

Anfitere, 16 Jan 2008 03:39 pm

I love the colour of the eyes!

Do they match their personalities?

Kaiverta, 16 Jan 2008 04:01 pm

@Anfitere: Good question. o.o I guess they do. I did that without realizing it. ^^; We'll see if they really DO match (colors to personalities) as the story goes on.

Seven, 16 Jan 2008 08:18 pm

I'd have to say the same. I love the eyes, and how they are the only things on the pages with color. It really makes them stand out, and gives a certain depth to the art.

Loving the story so far. And you should totally start updating Wednesdays cause then I won't have to wait till Saturday to read the new pages! ^_^

~Seven

CrystalAngelNeko, 16 Jan 2008 10:23 pm

I want to do some fan art but I need the colors of all the characters... I wanna do a group pic of the brothers =3 Well you have a character page up anytime soon?

Kaiverta, 16 Jan 2008 10:25 pm

Fanart! @CrystalAngelNeko: Ooh, yay! I can't wait to see it. :D You can find Character Profiles on my main Profile. I just made another 'webcomic' dedicated to their profiles since I suck at HTML and CCS (whatever >>) coding and couldn't figure it out. ^^;

Here's a link: http://www.smackjeeves.com/comicprofile.php?id=24411

jinsunpyo18, 16 Jan 2008 11:14 pm

ahh, you work is AMAZING! The detailing, the backgrounds, the gorgeous drawing style. I <3 it!

Mr_Dave, 17 Jan 2008 11:43 am

=D your comics are great!
I faved ages ago, but I dunno if I said
but yeah!
its great artwork ^^

64Cheese, 17 Jan 2008 09:19 pm

Hey, I faved this a while back, not sure if I left any comments, so...

Great manga! I love your art, it's awesome, and the story is very interesting. I think Tactic's my favourite, but I'm not sure yet!

winzrella, 18 Jan 2008 05:22 am

Been a while.
Didn't come and read anycomics during the holidays really, so I'm trying to get up-to-date with my favourites.
You have just rehooked me with this comic with the new pages I could read now. I'm really exited to know more about this story and the world. And the characters you have seem so interesting. Can't wait to find out more ^_^

CrystalAngelNeko, 18 Jan 2008 08:27 am

thanks for the link =^.^= I'll get workin on it X3

Kaiverta, 18 Jan 2008 09:31 am

CyrstalAngelNeko: Yay! I can't wait to see it. ^^

Everyone else too: Thanks to you guys for commenting! :D I really appreciate feedback. It lets me know what people like/dislike about the story, and thus I know what to change and what NOT to change. ^^ SO again, thank youu~

Zhai, 19 Jan 2008 09:47 am

Absolutely love their different characters and of course the eyes^^

MyriamD, 19 Jan 2008 11:53 pm

Adore ze characters. ADORE! :3

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